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This isn't me
Not who I used to be
Nothing inside
Empty shell
Condemned
In my eternal hell.

Walking the fine line
Dancing on the razor's edge
What once lived
Now is dying
Left cold
Turning purple and numb.

My last breath
Escapes...
An inaudible hiss
Through frozen lips.
Blood drying
Upon separated flesh.

A corpse remains
Dead, on the ground.
Lifeless eyes
Pointed west
Toward the sea.
Too late.

Didn't make it...

home.

~Maijken D. K*****~
©2004-2009 ~incurableromantic
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simply one of my best works

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:iconjadex41:
Deep, very deep.:)
:iconprexian:
wow, i love it. its really beautiful and sad. id love to read more stuff like this, so keep it up!

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:iconincurableromantic:
*nods*

I was going through some difficult stuff when I wrote this. *sigh*

But I'm a lot better now.

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I :heart: PlannedProphecies
:iconincurableromantic:
*smiles*

Glad ya like it.

Sadly, I can only write things like this when I am going through intense emotional pain.

So I can only produce work such as this under extreme conditions.

I'm very happy to know you liked it.

And hopefully someday soon, I can reach into my mind and come up with something as good as this is.

:hug:

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I :heart: PlannedProphecies
:iconprexian:
oh. in view of that, ive changed my mind. dont keep it up. wait no. if you happen to be in intense emotional pain because of a completely unrelated manner, then go for it.

what happened that put you in such pain?

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:iconincurableromantic:
basically, i had a fight w/my fiance that resulted in him yelling at me, which was uncalled for. and it also resulted in him calling me a name that wasn't very nice.

when we fight, they're bad. our fights are always vicious. we're very intense, passionate people. so when we fight, it's never good. but of course, no fight is good anyway.

i like to think that my best work comes when i'm like this. that's the way it's always been for me. i don't enjoy being like that, but i enjoy the work that comes from it.

i'm really glad you liked it. i honestly did not expect anyone to.

:hug:

and no worries, hun, i am sure that work like that will happen again. hopefully later than sooner, but i know more will come....

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I :heart: PlannedProphecies
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Yes.. I love this piece. You did a great job on it, hon.
:iconjadex41:
Ok, I hope that you'er alright now.
:icondeadnbroken:
beautiful...

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I reject your reality and substitute my own!

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